Optimizing A Reddit Ad

I like to scroll on reddit a little , well whom I am kidding, I like to scroll Reddit a lot .

And while I scroll, I come across some Ad’s which bother me and one such add is attached below .

Now first things first, what’s wrong with this Ad :-

1)The ad copy is too complicated to understand.

2)CTA Should be placed after you have described the Problem, not first thing in the Ad .

3)The hero shot (Graphic) is way too vague.

This app basically protects shopify stores from fake visitors aka bots who mess up with site’s analytics which decrease Google organic rankings & Eat up a Website Ad Budget.

Keeping all this in mind, I have written 2 new variations of this Ad :-

1)Stop Fake Bots From Clicking On Your Website & Wasting Your Ad Budget. Install Bot Protector & Secure Your Website In Just 5 Minutes.

2)Your Competitors May Be Using Click Bot Farms To Swallow Up Your Ad Budget & Hurt Your Organic Rankings. Join The 102 Shopify Stores Who Are Click Fraud Protected Today!

Let me know what you think of these Ads and which variation do you prefer ?

If you would like me to have a look at Your Ad’s and Landing Page then mail me at :

akshitbhatia1400@gmail.com 📩